FMP Play Fight (Anim) and questionnaire

My review

Overall I am happy with the outcome of the animation as I feel its the best I can do at this stage of my life. This is the first proper animation I’ve ever made and with the fact it doesn’t look too shit and embarrassing by the end makes me feel worlds better. That being said it isn’t perfect as there are some messy drawings around which shows my lack of ability, as well as some of the animation, being janky but I’m saying it a part of its charm so it’s alright. The fact the animation is fast paced helps hide the imperfections by keeping the animation going. In the future, I’ll give more time to neaten up the characters and learn how to shade as these things will help the animation.

Below is the development of the animation showing the four stages of the process. from storyboard to animatic 1 and 2 then finally the final piece, you can see clearly scenes I cut out changed to get to the final pieces.



Once I exported my animation and uploaded it to YouTube, I then went on to making a questionnaire for friends and colleagues to fill out so then I would know how to make it even better. I believe that getting three groups of people; media students, the general public and professional animators to review my animation would allow me to get opinions from people who know how a professional animation should look like compared to those who don’t. Candidates that know how to animate could pick up on smaller detail and could provide a way to work around the problem.

Target Audience

John Pliskin – 16

Sebastian Mia – 14

Joe Mcfly – 19

General public

Jay Garrick – 32

Sarah Carpenter – 29

—————————————————————————————————————————————–John Pliskin –

I feel the animation is good for a beginner but there are some spots in the video where the animation is stuttery but ill base that from this being his first. I love the animation style as it gives the boys a nice charm much like shows I’ve seen. I would say try to have a smoother animation for your future projects but overall I like it 7/10.

—————————————————————————————————————————————–Sebastian Mia –

I don’t really know that much about animation but I really like it and think it’s impressive that a first timer could do this. I could never do something like this, I enjoyed the choice of music but next time try to make it neater. 7.5/10

—————————————————————————————————————————————–Joe Mcfly –

I have had experience in animation before as I’ve done some short project’s and know how hard it is to make.  I feel overall the design and aesthetics are pleasing but the lines and stuttery animation hold it down and could be better with time. As this is his first time I’ll let him off but I enjoyed the upbeat feel. 6/10

—————————————————————————————————————————————–Jay Garrick –

It was good 8/10

—————————————————————————————————————————————–Sarah Carpenter –

I found that the animation and the imaginative feel to it really helped the animation, as well as its fast paced nature. It may be a little messy at times but it adds to the charm of the animation. It doesn’t go on for long but it shows enough to make it enjoyable. 8/10

FMP Production development

After the production of my animatic, I started to look into ways to produce my animation. So the first step on things to do was to produce the backgrounds to the scenes so I wouldn’t have to go back and add in the backgrounds after the animation has been made, it also helps me set the characters up better in the scene. I used Photoshop to draw the backgrounds and based them on the scenes from my sketches and the angles they are at. In Adobe Photoshop I ensure I named all the layers appropriately so then I wouldn’t get confused in my animating process, even if it meant naming six+ layers which I did for certain frames. As I wanted my final animatic to be 1080×1920 I had to create each shot to this size. As I didn’t want to stretch the frame to where parts of the sketches were missing I used the Clone Stamp and Spot Healing Brush Tool to fill in the empty gaps. I did notice that some edges weren’t visible on the moving layers so I drew them in with the Paint Brush Tool. The sketches help me plan out the angles better for the final animation so if I need to rotate an angle more I can at this stage. After planning the room I start searching for colours for the room, I based the room off my old living room cream for the walls and I feel the end look works well and compliments each other. After that adding other objects like the chair and window which went through the same process as before.

After I finished the background designs I started to design the intro page starting in the sky and then moving down to reveal the houses where the boys are. I had the idea for this intro from the beginning as I felt it was a good way to start and reveal the boys in the house. I did this scene by making three different photoshop files one for the logo another for the sky/clouds and the third for the houses.


This is the final animatic including a lot of scenes that I will use in the final piece and some that were scrapped (if you wanna watch the whole thing check out the other post). In this animatic, you will see the characters pre colour this is the base of what the final animation will be before I work out the collours of the final animation.Turn around 2.jpgturn around 1.jpg

These are the full character turnarounds of the two main characters, with colour. This turnaround is based of the drawn one I did in my sketchbook. I used these character turnarounds frequently in the production of my animation for reference, this helps speed up production time when I was stuck with the characters on stupid angles.

In the animation, I switched frequently between four main software, Adobe Premiere Pro, Photoshop, After Effects and Animate. For the drawn part of the animation, I used Photoshop and Animate to work out the pacing and the drawing. For the editing, I used the other software. It may seem like more work but my using more software it kinda split up the workload and made me feel better about my project.